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tw334n4rchy
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PostSubject: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeSat 29 Sep 2007, 1:27 pm

I use to have an orange,
It was a very nice orange
It was round and orange like an orange should be
It smelled like an orange should be
It was orange like an orange should be
It felt like how an orange should be
I ate it




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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeSun 30 Sep 2007, 4:37 pm

i already said "LMAOOOO!!!!" to this before someone went on a deleting rampage
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 6:52 pm

Like I said before I told you guys to pack.... >.< stop nagging me about the the deleting stuff. Anyway I like this poem. Was this poem based on a true thing that happened and you felt the inspiration to write it or was it all imagination?
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 7:04 pm

When an orange unravels,
Bringing the demise of its dreams,
It allows the destroyer,
To find secrets,
Locked under the surface.

It reveals little,
Or so it seems.
How little you know,
May be as much it will show.

For what is underneath may not be,
All that is to see...



I was inspired :P
'tis not the best poem I've ever written though.


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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 7:06 pm

uh..i believe i've eatened an orange before yes
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 7:08 pm

lol. who hasnt eaten an orange before?!
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 7:10 pm

no duh it was ment to be sarcastic...and ha was joking too
btw u might want to start a new topic if ur gna do a poem too or else ur poem might just be lost
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 7:11 pm

lol i know. but i was just asking ...
honestly who HASN'T actually eaten an orange
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 7:13 pm

europeans back in the dark ages
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeTue 02 Oct 2007, 7:21 pm

ehh i dont really care about my stuff nobody reads it anyways lol
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeWed 03 Oct 2007, 6:38 pm

like ha said doesnt take 4ever
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PostSubject: Re: Poem By Me   Poem By Me Icon_minitimeWed 03 Oct 2007, 10:30 pm

i know, i knoww.
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